Tuesday, 16 April 2013

Essay feedback..

Saw Rachael

Went through essay

Tidy up the title.. What do I mean by it? How can it be phrased better

Throughout the essay dont use me, my, I, we etc be in 3rd person

Make sure all the pictures are actually relevant.. Can they be compared easily and are the all relevant to the essay questions.

With the writting, by using more specific words I can cut out whole sentences. This will help to not go over the word limit.

Remember the essay is a debate or an argument between two things not just a conversation!

Keep returning to the question so that it isn't forgotten.

Go over each paragraph and maje sure it flows well.

Look on blackboard for sone tips and pointers on essay writting and how to plan it out more appropriately.

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